a:4:{s:4:"Name";s:14:"Jonathan Brink";s:5:"Email";s:14:"jb@thriven.org";s:7:"Website";s:24:"http://jonathanbrink.com";s:7:"Message";s:184:"Morgan, I love your new post, but it needs a hook in the beginning the ties it all together.  You're drawing a conclusion that leads to UC Davis, so perhaps open with a point about it.";}