Morgan, I love your new post, but it needs a hook in the beginning the ties it all together.  You're drawing a conclusion that leads to UC Davis, so perhaps open with a point about it.
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AUTHOR: Jonathan Brink
AUTHOR EMAIL: jb@thriven.org
AUTHOR URL: http://jonathanbrink.com
SUBJECT: [Provoketive Magazine] Eroticizing the Cross
IP: 76.215.211.128
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    [Name] =&gt; Jonathan Brink
    [Email] =&gt; jb@thriven.org
    [Website] =&gt; http://jonathanbrink.com
    [Message] =&gt; Morgan, I love your new post, but it needs a hook in the beginning the ties it all together.  You're drawing a conclusion that leads to UC Davis, so perhaps open with a point about it.
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